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No kingdom shall come
Let my will be done on Earth
To Hell with Heaven

@starbreaker Oh man, I totally read that in the original verse style too.

@starbreaker It is, except I kept getting stuck on the last line because the original has more syllables. XD

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@thindol True, but "as it is in heaven" is the wrong sentiment and one syllable too many for the third line of a haiku.

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@starbreaker Yeah, it's more a comment on how strong that memorization was for me - kept tripping over it. Programming and all that nonsense.

@thindol Ah. My mistake. I grew up exposed to Roman Catholicism, but never got the full treatment (Catholic school, catechism, first communion, confirmation, priest's dick in ass, etc).

But some clown once challenged me to provide examples of atheistic poetry, hoping for a checkmate, and I composed that on the spot.